Geology 100W: Technical Writing Workshop

Spring, 1999



Paper #4



Assignment: Turn in a 3 - 4 page double-spaced paper that describes a Geology Club presentation you attended. In addition to a review of the content covered, include some commentary about the experience.



Intended audience: Another Bay Area college hosts a lecture series for its Geology Club. The organizers of that club would like some feedback on the content of the talk and the overall effectiveness of the lecturer. Based on your comments, the organizers may decide to invite this lecturer to their campus. Assume that the people reading your critique are lower-division geology majors.



Goal: You are writing a review of an event; you will have to summarize the topic discussed, and judge its appropriateness for a general lower-division geology club audience. You should also include some information about the organization of the talk, and how the material was presented (i.e., did the lecturer make use of any multi-media equipment?). A brief evaluation/recommendation would also be appreciated by the other college.



The Geology Club schedule follows. A few lectures will be added to this schedule; note that some will not be held on Mondays.

Spring 1999 Geology Club Schedule



M 2/1 12:30 DH306 Charles Bacon, USGS The Great Eruption of Mt. Mazama, and the Formation of Crater Lake
TH 2/4 12:30 DH306 Marith Reheis, USGS-Denver Pleistocene Lake Lahontan
M 2/8 12:30 DH306 Kenneth Bencala, USGS Stream-Catchment Connections: In fluence in Acidic Streams
M 2/15 12:30 DH306 Paula Messina, SJSU Which Way Did They Go? A Sliding Rock Update
M 2/22 12:30 DH306 Linda Dorn, SCVWD Santa Clara Groundwater Basin & MTBE
M 3/1 12:30 DH306 Jeffrey Seitz, CSU Hayward Experimental Studies of Geologic Fluids: Thermodynamics and Specroscopy
M 3/8 12:30 DH306 Jim Gardner, USGS The Week Lake Tahoe Disappeared
M 3/15 12:30 DH306 TBA TBA
M 3/22 12:30 DH306 David Clague, MBARI Hawaiian Submarine Geology
M 4/5 12:30 DH306 Atilla Aydin, Stanford University TBA
M 4/12 12:30 DH306 Arthur Ford, USGS Geology and Petrology of the Jurassic Dufek Intrusion
M 4/19 12:30 DH306 Cynthia Dusel-Bacon, USGS Stratiform zinc-lead mineralization in the Yukon-Tanama Upland
Paper IV Due 4/21
M 4/26 12:30 DH306 Nate Berube, Helge Alsleben, John Siskowic, Bob Bogar, Cindy Hayek, SJSU TBA
M 5/3 12:30 DH306 Bruce Richmond, USGS El Niño and La Niña Effects Along the Santa Cruz Coast
M 5/10 12:30 DH306 Roy A. Bailey, USGS Long Valley Caldera
TBA TBA TBA Annual Picnic


Suggestions: During the presentation, take good notes! Detailed notes will allow you to remember salient points; you can always organize your ideas later on. Present observations of how engaged the audience was, how clear the presentation was, whether you found it informative and/or confusing, etc. Although the presenter is not among the group who would read your paper, you are also encouraged to include suggestions on how you would have changed the presentation to make it more effective.



Your grade will be based on:


Grammar (spelling, punctuation, usage, etc): roughly 40%
Syntax (how sentences are constructed): roughly 40%
Organization (paragraph construction and order): roughly 20%


This paper is due no later than April 21, 1999.
I strongly suggest that you complete is much sooner than that; commitments quickly pile up as the semester goes on!